So close but so far

Just as we were near the final finishing post, we, as a group realised our storyline was very mish mash and montage-like, so we needed to add things to the storyline to link everything together so heres what we come up with:

• Ben (Doug) and Kirsty(antagonist) are friends who have finished school and decide to drive to an isolated area surrounded by forestry etc to have a few drinks with their friends.
• Ben gets quite drunk and decides to offer Kirsty a lift home, Kirsty kindly declines and begins to walk.
• Doug struggles to function soberly but insists on driving and ends up hitting Kirsty and Killing her.
• A few months later Doug is going to 'Doms' party and decides to take the 'short cut' through the area he hit kirsty

                                                     (original storyline continues after this point)

Basically we have added a few shots in before our planned storyline just to give the viewer a bit of background as to how and why this situaton has came about, I think the addition will create a more tense and interesting film opening. Now all we need to do is shoot this new footage.