New Shot ideas

We have decided our storyline is abit vague. These are the ideas we came up with brainstorming possible better storylines to our film, or thinking of things we could add in to improve the flow of our film. It seemed like we were taking one step forward and two back, although, the more planning and development we do of our film the better it should be, editings still underway and now we only need to film the new shots, looking good.